I liked this, then I thought I should actually read it; and honestly, it was delightful!
I had a full sense of the protagonist and her angst from the get - first person narration suits you. It also works for a great introduction to the environment. Given my recent trip to New York, I can especially relate to the unnavigable Q train and general fluster of the subway.
The prose is so illustrative! I love when you draw on your classics education to put a grand twist on how you see yourself. This should really be a novella at the least, would love to read more. And if not, at least I know which ice cream to get you next time we meet :)
I liked this, then I thought I should actually read it; and honestly, it was delightful!
I had a full sense of the protagonist and her angst from the get - first person narration suits you. It also works for a great introduction to the environment. Given my recent trip to New York, I can especially relate to the unnavigable Q train and general fluster of the subway.
The prose is so illustrative! I love when you draw on your classics education to put a grand twist on how you see yourself. This should really be a novella at the least, would love to read more. And if not, at least I know which ice cream to get you next time we meet :)
- Daniel xXx
aww thank you!! 😘 i'm glad you understand the Q angst...and yes we must be quirky and order ice cream at inappropriate venues xx